Lust - part 8
Posted August 6, 2013 at 8:01 pm
It's starting to get absurd... the sheer amount of words I'm having to use to get the story across in these strips. I'm sure there could be a little edited out, but in the end it would feel more robotic if I put less in. So we needed a fourth panel to get it in and paced decently. I like Lizzy in panel 4. I don't know what it is, but there's a quality to her in that panel that really feels "right" to me. I have to sit down and make sure, but I think this arc will wrap up next week... I'm going to want to do some silly, non-story based stuff and then move some other arc forward. There are things that need to still happen before the end of the year that I've been putting off for ages... it's time they actually happen.